January 3rd, 2009

Chapter 01 Page 03


  1. Crestlinger

    When in doubt: C4.

  2. TheDapMan

    Middle Right Panel: Sir, The gate(.) It won’t open.

    on that same panel I would pull the top bubble closer to the person speaking it and reduce the size of the tail by alot.

    I would then place the bottom bubble toward the top in order to show an unrestricted view of the Foreman.

    And having periods at the end of speech bubbles is something I would consider doing. It makes your story more immersive. Plus it reads better.

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