January 6th, 2009

Chapter 01 Page 06

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  1. TheDapMan

    -And as time passes(,) Mankind always seems to forget the dangers that lie just beneath the surface.

    I would also try not to use Ellipsis’ too much. The rule of thumb is that an Ellipsis in the beginning signifies that the speaker is pensive before speaking. In thought.

    An Ellipsis at the end usually means an unfinished thought, a leading statement, a slight pause, or a nervous or awkward silence. It can also be used to trail off into silence.

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