August 17th, 2015

Chapter 43 Page 15


  1. Solar

    I’ve been enjoying the story so far. It’ll be interesting to see how Rory survives the plot.

    One note: Above, you got most of your “theirs” correct. It should be “They’re (contraction of “they are”) up there in age.” (and it’s not the first grammatical error I noticed while catching up to this point…)
    Anyway, that’s the first and last time I’ll actually point it out. Onwards with the story! 😀

  2. The Random Panda

    Thanks! 😀 I’m glad you’re enjoying the story.

    And thanks for letting me know about the typos. I’ll definitely get this one fixed and start trying to find the others.

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