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July 17th, 2012 at 9:56 pm
When in doubt: C4.
January 30th, 2015 at 4:31 pm
Middle Right Panel: Sir, The gate(.) It won’t open.
on that same panel I would pull the top bubble closer to the person speaking it and reduce the size of the tail by alot.
I would then place the bottom bubble toward the top in order to show an unrestricted view of the Foreman.
And having periods at the end of speech bubbles is something I would consider doing. It makes your story more immersive. Plus it reads better.