January 5th, 2009

Chapter 01 Page 05

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  1. TheDapMan

    So on that day(,) one world came to an end… But in exchange, A new world had begun.

    I would further change the narrative a bit. Something along the lines of :

    The gate was sealed for a reason…
    To keep separate THAT which needed to be separate.
    On that day…
    One World died and another began.

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